The Sacred Dungeon Of Another World

Hmm... how to say this it is a very unique kind of premise for a story. The thing is first chapter fail to hook on. I still persisted till further around 68 chapters but that's it for me. The main issue for me is the flow of story. The flow of this story is not smooth for me and at this time with my reading list I cannot continue with this. The characters are very interesting though and world mechanics seem to be good but I have seen none in detail till now. So yeah the story flow and character interaction of mc were a weak point in this story for me. Wishing all the best to author.

Hight: 5,5

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"Because I needed you. I saw it. Your power, your strength. I needed it to survive in this world."

My door was already ajar and my bed was cleaned spotless. Damn that woman, she had the time to party and clean my room, a trooper to say the least. I plopped on my bed and threw my phone on the dresser. As I did, something white caught my eye. Just on my desk, a white envelope was placed perfectly in the center.

After careful consideration, and reviewing every on of the 100+ web novel I’ve read until this point, I have to call this my favorite novel of all time. The characters have actual personality. The power system is well defined enough for reference, but he entire plot revolves more around personal growth than strength. The main character is interesting, real, and flawed enough to feel like a real, relatable person. However, the supporting characters are all equally fleshed out and interesting.The story is filled with amazing plot twists, but none of them are forced or unessisary. And most of all, the story flips between actions being perceived as important, to being seen as stupid, back to being seen as genius. The world building is the best I’ve ever seen, and it’s populated with the best characters I’ve ever read. On top of that, the conflict and goals are well defined and consistent.I rarely rate novels, but this story is too good for its current low popularity on here. Read it!

So far I’m enjoying the story, but I can’t recall what most of the characters look like as there are so many introduced at once. Could you write a list of all important characters, their physical appearance, and a brief synopsis of who they are in relation to the story?Also it might help if you use the characters physical appearance to describe them briefly after you’ve initially introduced them. To clarify this is after you described their appearance. So writing something like, “The pink haired girl, lily, asked”. Not saying this better than what your doing but it might be something too consider.

I'll admit, this is a very different type of web novel that asks you to focus much less on the plot and more on the characters. Doing that, for me, creates a much stronger ability to enjoy the series. There's already a foundation established for what we can expect for the end of the series and a very rough idea of how that's going to happen. How well this story turns out depends on the characters, which I do like so far.I look forward to reading more chapters from the author. It's a very kick back and read it type of series that doesn't ask too, too much from you.The dish description could more detail, admittedly however. If that can be fixed, I'll enjoy this series a lot more than I currently do.